MSN: Free VPK helps ready young children for school, but for some families it's unavailable
This story was updated to correct a misspelling. Five-year-old Marlaina Paulding likes playing in the tents in her VPK classroom at Felix A. Williams Elementary School in Martin County. She likes ...
Free VPK helps ready young children for school, but for some families it's unavailable
However, the problem I'm facing with my current treatment is uneven pacing. Certain expository elements can't really be reduced in size much, such as the backstory of a fictitious society that plays a big role in the unfolding plot; other elements, such as action scenes, can be reduced to one or two sentences. This poses two problems: One, since most of the exposition is towards the beginning ...
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Instead, he employs narration, gestures, or just an absence of tags to control the situational framework and the pacing of conversations and exchanges between characters.
I am extremely lucky here with my critique partners/Alphas, and all suggestions I have gotten were helpful, considerate and very thorough in their own way, whatever I asked, be it technical/realism stuff - Alpha-Zero, hear me? - flow/pacing or characterisation and the reader's perspective, it always is enlightening to get their comments.
I'm mostly just looking for someone to judge the characters, setting, and plot/pacing. I basically just need to know what you like about it, what you don't like about it, and what's confusing.